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Nathaniel Dansereau's avatar

This conjures for me a very vivid image of an empty room.

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Mike smith's avatar

I'm loving this!

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Josh Datko's avatar

Is there a center to the empty room? The emptiness is everywhere.

This reminds me of a section from a book called "Media: The Second God" where there's a quip about not finding the center to something that surrounds you. Perhaps it's not completely related, but it's what I think of.

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Laura's avatar

Ooh interesting, nah I think everything's related! On the day I wrote this, it was my wanting to write but having nothing going on, and it did function to get me into a mood to move on but hmm do like what it became. Someone said I should polish it up and share. My brain's still a little HUH, so writing's mmm. Mostly doing a lot of revising. Always happy for your thoughts!

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